I wanted the dialogue to create characters. If each had their own voice, way of speaking or attitude even better.
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Chat Me Up? Feedback Round One BFM 2021
I’m a very visual writer. So in this round I was looking for a picture, conveyed in a scene or setting. I wanted the sentence to flow without being too concerned as to whether the writer used 20 or 50 words. Also, for the characters to behave like people. And I enjoy a little wit too. I am not particularly interested in anything too cliched, and although I think I’m not keen on romance, if written well then I kind of love it!
Round five feedback ~ Smut Marathon 2020
Specification for round five ~ Your story must have the word ‘fireplace’ at least once.
Round four feedback ~ Smut Marathon 2020
Specification for round four– Write a story that features dancing.
Round three feedback ~ Smut Marathon 2020
Specification for round three – Your character is masturbating and someone is watching them. Write about what the voyeur sees.
