Unreality is the final episode of my series BARS – Woman in a Cage.
Catch up with all the other parts here.
This story continues from where I left off in part four.
Warning – Unreality talks about a woman in a cage!
So far in a nut shell – Gill fucked a stranger so her husband Digger locked her in a cage to try and modify her behaviour. It worked. Digger is on his way home to finally free her so they can begin a new life together.
Unreality – Part Five ~ Bars
Right. Digger here.
Don’t think too badly of me for keeping my wife in a cage. She had it coming. Whenever her hormones began to rage, so did she. But I really don’t want to be looking back over all that now. It’s in the past. We’re moving on.
You know the cage did its job. Gill’s grown so much calmer. Like a different woman. A wife, not a loud mouth tart anymore. Don’t get me wrong, I still loved her even when she randomly fucked the guy from the pub. But that hurt. If you want to know it stabbed me right in the gut. It was inevitable things had to change. So I made the change.
And now we’ll be a couple again. A new start in Devon. I’ve just said goodbye to my work mates at the tarmac company. I won’t miss them. I’ll meet new guys at the next job. Friends are ten a penny but a good wife – not so easy to come by.
Gill is going to be a great wife. I’ll look after her; she depends on me more than she used to – gets a bit anxious, like. She needs me. That makes me feel good, manly, and she likes giving me pleasure. I only have to say the word and I can take any hole. Always open for me. Over the last few months our new lifestyle has made us both realise she likes it rough. Me too. Nothing gets me harder than restraining her as we fuck. We don’t make love anymore. Not for us. I can provide her with a firm hand and a cock that’s ready.
Recently I have taken to bathing her. So she’s a good, clean girl. Afterwards I brush her long curly hair and love how it cascades over her shoulders. Has to said, Gill is a beauty. When we first met a lot of guys I knew had already tried it on but she was too feisty for them. Apparently, she fell for my wicked grin and in the beginning I was able to control her just by us being together. Having lots of sex helped. But losing the job in the supermarket last year triggered something – almost acting as if she was single again and stopped putting me first. Being disrespectful which is out of order. I couldn’t tolerate that; so I built the cage.
When we find a new place to make a home I’ll get her started on doing better around the house. I don’t mind sharing the chores but she was such a lazy slut, the house always looked like a tip. Her attitude has changed since she came to terms with being locked up. She’ll do good, for sure.
Funny to think it’s the last time I’ll make this drive home from work. Gill never did like the Volvo, but – like me – it’s done the job. Rust around the arches and a dent in the passenger door. Seen better days. With the new position comes a higher salary. We can trade up. Maybe something better suited to the countryside – a jeep perhaps. We’ll need a four wheel drive on the Devon farm tracks, especially when the cold weather comes. I can picture Gill and me, cuddling up by a log fire this winter. Happy in a little thatched cottage. Maybe get a dog – company for her while I’m at work.
Right. Enough said really, best drive home. We got to pack for our trip. It will be fun house-hunting together. And I can’t wait to finally unlock her from the cage. She’s been in there a while. I was all set to let her out last night but no, she wanted to wait until I come home today. Like I said, Gill’s a bit needy now.
I’ll take the short-cut down Drovers Lane, one last time. It’s only a dirt track really, but a lot quicker than going right around the ‘A’ road.
Here we are. Damn it, ROAD CLOSED –again. Doesn’t always mean much though. Could be just a tree down or a deep puddle. Drovers goes straight through to the village, across the top of the brow, not weaving in and out the whole valley. Sod it. I’ll chance it – if I have to turn around, well that’s my tough luck.
God, I feel in a good mood. Life is coming together at last. And I worked at it too. Going to fuck Gill senseless tonight. Back in our own bed, at last. Might tie her arms above her head to the brass rods at the top. Let her know I’m in control. But first I’ll take her out to dinner – a fancy restaurant. A celebration. Get her to dress up nice – sexy – for me. Yeah, that’s what we’ll do. Might try Giuseppe’s in the town. I’m buzzing – feel a Kinks moment coming on. Such a great band. Where’s my CD? That one about unreality, illusions and working out if some one is authentic or not.
I think that’s why we don’t really have any mates – everybody round here seems so fake. I’d rather we didn’t see anyone. We don’t have neighbours close by either. Most would find it lonely, no friends or callers, but I like it. I’m always telling Gill we got to make it special between us. Rely on each other after all our families are both bloody useless. It is just me and her. I think she sees that now. Maybe when we settle in Devon we can socialise a bit. Meet another couple. We’ll have to make sure we can trust them though.
Right, that CD must be in the glove compartment… Got it.
All that I see, seems so unreal to me,
Is it the truth or is it only fantasy,
Is it a dream or is it unreal reality?
This song is so cool. As I said I think it applies more than ever these days – what or who is real? I know all the lyrics too. Love to sing along. Nobody can hear you when you’re driving either – “All around me is…”
All around me is such unreality,
Optical illusions as far as my eyes can see,
Is the whole thing a fake, or the ultimate reality?
That house is so big that it reaches right up to the clouds
It’s got hundreds of windows, so the people inside can look out,
And they look down below and wonder what it’s all about.
Look at that lady she got silver all over her face,
Is she a human being or a creature from outer space,
Is she authentic or phoney, I guess it’s just a matter of taste.
Oh because they can feel it, it’s gotta be the real thing,
Because they can touch it,
Damn. Tight bend… What the fuck… the road, it’s given away to gravel at the side – where’s the bloody curb gone? Gotta slow down… going too fast, can’t-can’t hold the-
All that I see seems so unreal to me,
…the wheel straight – what, I’m shooting off the edge, gotta stop …
… it’s true your life flashes, so many thoughts and picture. I’m going to crash into the chalk pit below – down, down – mind spinning.
But shit, Gill… she’s alone – waiting for me – still locked in the cage…
Is it the truth or is it only fantasy,
Is it a dream or is it unreal reality?
The very apt image is from Pixabay
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May More
A very enjoyable and entertaing series May. Great characterisation. Digger had to get his cumuppance but sadly, it seems,at Gill’s expense too. xx.
Thanks CP – I did wonder if u had been reading – glad u were xx
I do my best not to miss your work May. ?xx
Wow. Like others have already said, I did not see that ending coming. I love the way you blind-sided us, and the very clever concept and excellent execution ???
Compliments indeed! TY very much Jupiter x
You’re very welcome ?
So far in a nut shell … you crack me up.
Fucking Hell, May! ‘Bars’ is an exceptional story. I absolutely love how you ended it. I knew something was up when Digger was telling the story and read with trepidation to the end. When he got to the closed road sign I knew the ending. Both your characters are ‘pieces of work’, as they say, I am so proud of you. I get an Edgar Allen Poe vibe here.
Great ending May, I kinda guessed it when you mentioned how beat-up the car was. Then my mind flew back to Gill’s predicament. My guess for the direction your series was going – that he’d irrevocably broken her spirit in the worst way. This was dramatic and I like it better.
Your ability to speak in both character’s voices is great, your dialogue is getting so good. You’ve had us all hanging on for each episode, great development.
You totally surprised me with that ending, May! Wow. Now what’s to come for poor Gill?? I don’t know how she’ll cope what with how she’s changed. Well done on that ending. Surprised the hell out of me
I’ve been waiting for this next episode! Nice job as usual inhabiting a male voice in this one … you are amazing May and whenever you write like this I imagine you having such fun. And brilliant storytelling! I knew what would happen when you mentioned “road closed” but until then I expected more of the interactions between the two of them … which I was looking forward to. But of course this is dark and wonderful and, in your way, you’ve made it clever and amusing too. The tongue-in-cheek aspect of the previous stories has helped me go through this one with a light heart even though of course there is so much to be distressed about. This series was a lot of fun! Wonderful job. ??
NOT the ending I was expecting for this series, but as soon as you mentioned ‘Volvo’ I knew what was coming in this part! And it absolutely can NOT be the last part. We want a Part 6, from Gill, alone in her cage, waiting for her man….
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(These comments are being typed as I read all 5 parts – I’ll only press ‘post comment’ after I’ve read all 5 [if the above is still appropriate])
I mentioned the Volvo in part one too 😉
Holy crap May! That’s an ending that packed a punch, very well done, poor Gill. This highlights beautifully though why we don’t leave our subs locked up and unattended! Safety first because you never know what could happen. This is like an Aesop’s Fable for kink people x
Absolutely!
Loved the punchy writing style of this. This bit stuck out to me the most: “I think that’s why we don’t really have any mates – everybody round here seems so fake.” Even without reading the previous episodes, I feel like this says heaps about Digger and Gill’s relationship. Nice work!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. The first four parts were told by Gill – She was slightly more elaborate in her use of language, but Digger is a “straight to the point” kind of guy 😉
Oh shiiitt! That’s wild and I did not see that coming. I’m still holding out hope that Gill has a chance, what a horrible way for her to perish!
Thanks Blue for sticking with this. This is the final part – although I may do one more for subscribers – not sure yet x
I loved it!
Who say’s she’s perished? I’m waiting for Part 6.
I DEMAND A PART SIX !!
Wow May! I didn’t see that coming. I thought for a moment he is going to get home late and somehow she ends up dying but you veered the other direction. I enjoyed this series a lot more than I thought I would.
Really pleased you enjoyed it – my last series was 13 parts and for many reasons wanted to make this one a lot shorter x
That escalated quickly 🙁 There is something really satisfying about the harsh ending, though I wish Gill had a chance. Or maybe I misunderstood what is going on. Really enjoyed reading the series, thank you!
No mis understanding – so glad u stuck with it 😉
Now that’s an ending I didn’t see coming!
Rebel xox