Fast Flash ~ Marie mentioned in a recent post how good it is to challenge yourself with a 100 word (or less) fiction. I agree. Here is 55 word fiction. It is a snippet of a tale but a complete story, in my eyes, none the less…
Fast Flash
“Will you keep still for fuck’s sake.” Ben exclaimed. Nancy really was a terrible model but he couldn’t resist hiring her. After all she had amazing tits and always let him suckle them for as long as he wanted after a photo session. And as you can imagine one thing invariably led to another…
BTW the SEO readability on the is tale is perfect 😉 And I do love the lighting in this image.
More flashes from me?
Entered into these memes…
Beautiful outfit and fantastic writing!
yay thanks gem x
Nice boobs. Was there a continuation of the photo session?
What a beautiful picture 😍
lilly
Indeed, that IS a full tale, and a gorgeously sexy image, May! You are right, the lighting is perfect!
~ Marie xox
That picture is gorgeous May, excellent flash indeed 😉
How is SEO perfect here…the title does not even have a number 😉 ..ah nevermind the picture is clickbait enough
Paul you need to pay more attention 😉 SEO has many facets. And as I state above the “SEO Readability” – one small part of SEO as a whole – on the story itself, gets the green light across the board – and to me that is perfect lol
May 😉
I was too distracted to pay proper attention 😉
lol that’s click-bate for u 😉
You are so creative in your stories and photos. As I.read I feel you’ve pulled me inside yourself and involved me w you as you live your story .
This is so clever and your image is gorgeous. I have just written a Drabble for tomorrow which is a coincidence. I decided to follow Marie and challenge myself too and now I have read yours I feel even more inspired. Missy x
it will be amazing i am sure! xx
Image is amazing May!
<3
Love love love the colouring of that image! of course the model is lovely as well 🙂
Nice work on a 55 word story. I’m green with envy at your ability to say so much in so little 🙂
write it out and cut every word that is not adding anything particular to the story x
Oh, I agree — it’s a whole tale! 🙂
The lighting in your image is fabulous.
Thanks Feve! x