Fast Flash ~ Marie mentioned in a recent post how good it is to challenge yourself with a 100 word (or less) fiction. I agree. Here is 55 word fiction. It is a snippet of a tale but a complete story, in my eyes, none the less…
Fast Flash
“Will you keep still for fuck’s sake.” Ben exclaimed. Nancy really was a terrible model but he couldn’t resist hiring her. After all she had amazing tits and always let him suckle them for as long as he wanted after a photo session. And as you can imagine one thing invariably led to another…
BTW the SEO readability on the is tale is perfect 😉 And I do love the lighting in this image.
More flashes from me?
Entered into these memes…
The story is short, but good, like your boobs. Especially those protruding nipples.
Definitely Mmmmmm, in word and pic. Delicious.
Beautiful outfit and fantastic writing!
yay thanks gem x
Nice boobs. Was there a continuation of the photo session?
What a beautiful picture 😍
lilly
Indeed, that IS a full tale, and a gorgeously sexy image, May! You are right, the lighting is perfect!
~ Marie xox
That picture is gorgeous May, excellent flash indeed 😉
How is SEO perfect here…the title does not even have a number 😉 ..ah nevermind the picture is clickbait enough
Paul you need to pay more attention 😉 SEO has many facets. And as I state above the “SEO Readability” – one small part of SEO as a whole – on the story itself, gets the green light across the board – and to me that is perfect lol
May 😉
I was too distracted to pay proper attention 😉
lol that’s click-bate for u 😉
You are so creative in your stories and photos. As I.read I feel you’ve pulled me inside yourself and involved me w you as you live your story .
This is so clever and your image is gorgeous. I have just written a Drabble for tomorrow which is a coincidence. I decided to follow Marie and challenge myself too and now I have read yours I feel even more inspired. Missy x
it will be amazing i am sure! xx
Image is amazing May!
<3
Love love love the colouring of that image! of course the model is lovely as well 🙂
Nice work on a 55 word story. I’m green with envy at your ability to say so much in so little 🙂
write it out and cut every word that is not adding anything particular to the story x
Oh, I agree — it’s a whole tale! 🙂
The lighting in your image is fabulous.
Thanks Feve! x