smut marathon round four

Smut Marathon Round Four ~ SoSS

Smut Marathon Round Four

My entry for the Smut marathon round four was not my best result yet – but neither was it my worse. I managed to get a few points from the public vote, but yet again, none from the judges. But do you know what?

I LOVED MY ENTRY…

Smut Marathon Round Four ~ Click to view other entries & feedback

One thing the smut marathon has helped me do is to explore my writing. I wrote this story in a genre I have never tackled before. Sci-fi. I don’t even read sci-fi or watch movies of that type so I was really challenging myself when I penned this tale. The spec we received was – one person, one sex-toy. Here it is…

Click on this to read the story…

Feedback for my Smut Marathon Round Four entry

I had some mixed feedback comments. The complimentary ones saying it was brave, original and imaginative. That’s me 😉

One comment mentioned it had different tenses. This was deliberate and part of the story. Another said how it started as a review and then went on to be a description. The guy in my story was adding the description of using the toy as part of his review. I do that with my sex toy try-outs. Also, I didn’t think I needed to go into detail about why the toys had been banned, liking the reader to have a few things to mull over and imagine themselves. To stimuate them into thinking rather than just reading.

Cara mentioned how she found the second part sexy but the beginning did not do it for her. I have to agree but I crafted it like that. Maybe I should have thought more about my audience and less about how I wanted it to be.

Marie said she loved the story and that I had done well to make it so different from the others. She felt I needed to have more words to make it really hot. Once again I agree. We were allowed 300 and I was trying to pack a lot into it.

My personal favourites from the smut marathon round four can be found HERE and they are:

Round Five of the Smut Marathon

Voting finishes for this round tomorrow night ( 09/06/2018).

Please CLICK HERE to vote now. There are only 25 writers left and we need your votes – I need your votes.

Current Sex Toy Reviews

Me with the Crescendo from Mystery Vibe

So my round four smut marathon post was a futeristic review – in a world that had banned sex toys. Today the sex toy industry is booming. Miss Scarlet shares a review regarding the product that has given her the most orgasms; Rain Bullet Vibrator.  And the toy that Aria Vega recently wrote about looks incredible. Aria states the Tantus Curve is the most versitile dildo she owns.

Now you are at the end of this sharing post – please don’t forget to VOTE… But not if you are reading this after the 9th June 2018 😉

Header image from Pixabay…

5 thoughts on “Smut Marathon Round Four ~ SoSS”

  1. I am enjoying the Smut Marathon and I will continue as long as I can but when I see such wide variations amongst the judges it confirms to me that I must write what I want to write and not worry about what others might think. In the latest results table you see examples of one judge scoring a 10 and another a 1 – for the same entry! And its the same from the public votes. To me that proves a reader will either ‘get’ what I’ve written or not, so there is no point trying to pander to them!! 🙂

  2. Thank you for liking my story and saying so, May. I too found that come commenters completely miss what the intent or style my stories intended.

    It will probably come as no surprise that I adore your Crescendo Review Photo.

  3. Thanks Cara – not quite up to the standard of yours but it was a different style for me and I keep trying to do that on a day to day basis ;-0 xx

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