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See my ring?
Thrilled I was.
She gave it to me, green eyes shining, and said, “I love you, wear my ring?”
Pam was all I ever wanted and I’d been dreaming of such a moment for a few months and yeah, in case you were wondering, it was romantic. Not only that, but the ring fitted perfectly. I put it on and she squealed with delight, jumping up and down.
“I have one the same.” she boasted slipping it on her finger. “That means you’re mine now,” Pam whispered dreamily.
I smiled thinking that she was bound to be up for sex that night. I was right. Horny as hell. We fucked in the living room first. She squealed. Once in the bedroom I spread her legs and rammed her, over and over. As I shot my Jizz inside her cunt she squealed again for good measure.
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I loved it – a bit of white a white witch was she? The dialogue was great and your fella was a very ‘May’ rough diamond.
I loved your story, and found it very whimsical.
What I didn’t love was your description of this middle aged man watching online porn. It was too real – like you’ve got access to my laptop camera and know what I do!
🙂
I do Nero! Me and google are watching u!
A lovely and unexpected love story. Love what you did here 🙂
Rebel xox
Oh wow. This was a great read and definitely didn’t end up where I thought it would. Very nice!
Thanks Kayla – glad you liked it 😉
Very cool and different. Really liked reading this!
Fantastic. I love a touch of magic ?
Hmmm. The ties that bind. Or is it really magic?
I was nervous reading. This seriously has the markings of something supernatural and creepy happening. You definitely surprised me there. Nicely done.
Haha u were nervous cause u thought I may kill someone lol – I feel the same when i read your tales x
Such realistic dialogue, May, this was a fun story.
She has cast a spell on me. One I hope never breaks. I like what you did with the image. The story is wonderful.
Glad u like it. Funny thing is I wrote this first and then went to your blog for a look around and your lady does indeed have red hair! I just must have known 😉
It is amazing what inspiration does some days.
Thanks again for
Your writing.
I loved how real these two characters were.
Thank you for reading – that is always what I try and do with my characters 😉
Your characters always have the ring of truth about them May. With a few deft words you create their believable world. I love your bad boys. And this one didn’t come to a sticky end. Well not yet! xx
He did get a little sticky in the living room! xx
ringless can work
Oh May! This has your magic with words and character and it’s so fun to see you make a story from my friends’ photo. I love things that are creative and dirty AND romantic and you nailed all of the above.
I love unobtrusive magical realism, and your short story is definitely one of those! In reality, the rings like that are far less tangible and harder to notice, let alone remove.